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Submitted: December 26, 2007
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Hermione Granger. **Looks best on full view** This was a little hard to do. This character essentially doesn't wear lipstick, she's a kid. So it was hard not to draw a full set of lips on her and not make it look weird. Not sure how happy I am with it despite that decision. But oh well.
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Very nice job! I really like the texture on her clothes. With regards to the lips--maybe you could have drawn part of the bottom of the lower lip or the cleft on the upper lip?

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Yeah, I still might add to it. I just didn't want her to look as if she was wearing lipstick. I might do a revision, I already had to do one to the nose, so...

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You really under-sell yourself sometimes. I think this looks exceptional! The shadows and the texture on the sweater is FANTASTIC. :-) I also agree with your decision on the lips. I don't know how you would have done that and not made it look like she was wearing lipstick or something.

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Thanks. I'm still not happy with her face. The more I look at it now, the less I'm happy with her eyes besides her mouth looking too small. The sweater is about the only thing I'm happy with; the hair didn't turn out too bad either. Just the face...cripes, I'm not happy with it.

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Very nice work on the forshortening effect on the right arm :nod: Nice work all around, man: D
Wow, I love the details on her sweater!! O_O Her face looks fine in my opinion.

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you could try just giving her a top lip....it would giver her lips without them looking like she's an adult.....

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I might try that. Thanks for the recommendation. :D

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